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:::If that article is constructed in that form, then it may be an appropriate entry, but you will need to clean it up first.  As it is right now, it says very little.  What are the plans of the two candidates?  You completely leave that out and instead address only the conclusion of a group to that which you have not even explained. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 03:35, 15 June 2008 (EDT)
 
:::If that article is constructed in that form, then it may be an appropriate entry, but you will need to clean it up first.  As it is right now, it says very little.  What are the plans of the two candidates?  You completely leave that out and instead address only the conclusion of a group to that which you have not even explained. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 03:35, 15 June 2008 (EDT)
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Thank you. --[[User:Joaquín Martínez]], [[User talk:Joaquín Martínez|talk]] 15:43, 16 June 2008 (EDT)
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