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| | + | 1.The Revolution of 1800 was the first peaceful change in power by a vote. It was a change from Adams to Jefferson. |
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| − | 1.The Revolution of 1800 was the first peaceful change in power by a vote. It was a change from Adams to Jefferson.
| + | : Excellent, and concisely put. Will use in model answers. |
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| | 2. I would have approved of the Louisiana purchase because it helped our country to expand all the way to the pacific. | | 2. I would have approved of the Louisiana purchase because it helped our country to expand all the way to the pacific. |
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| | + | : OK. (Capitalize the "p" in "pacific"). |
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| | 3. A cause of the war of 1812 was that England did not fully recognize the America was a country. | | 3. A cause of the war of 1812 was that England did not fully recognize the America was a country. |
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| | + | : OK, a bit general, but insightful. |
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| | 4. What I like most about the Monroe Administration was the fact that they were conservative and that they had the county’s best interests in mind. | | 4. What I like most about the Monroe Administration was the fact that they were conservative and that they had the county’s best interests in mind. |
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| | + | : Good. |
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| | 5. The Jacksonian democracy means that the middle and lower class people voted for Jackson. | | 5. The Jacksonian democracy means that the middle and lower class people voted for Jackson. |
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| | + | : Good, could say more. |
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| | 6. The Marshall court was the Supreme Court under the chief justice John Marshall. | | 6. The Marshall court was the Supreme Court under the chief justice John Marshall. |
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| | + | : Right, but what is it known for doing? See model answers. (Minus 1). |
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| | 7. The Bull is England, the bear is Russia, and Columbia is the United States, the cartoon was drawn in 1813 and I think the artist’s viewpoint was trying to show how stupid England was. | | 7. The Bull is England, the bear is Russia, and Columbia is the United States, the cartoon was drawn in 1813 and I think the artist’s viewpoint was trying to show how stupid England was. |
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| | + | : Yes, but more than that. See model answers. (Minus 1). |
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| | + | : Good work. Score: 68/70.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 09:00, 11 October 2008 (EDT) |