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This article has a lot of wildly inaccurate and unsourced information in it.  It also can't seem to decide whether BO is President or not - the picture on the right says he is, the text varies from claiming he's won the election, to him being Senator.  I'd love to help clean this up, but can't seem to edit the page?  Ready to help.  [[User:FNNoonan|FNNoonan]] 15:15, 28 January 2009 (EST)

This article has a lot of wildly inaccurate and unsourced information in it.  It also can't seem to decide whether BO is President or not - the picture on the right says he is, the text varies from claiming he's won the election, to him being Senator.  I'd love to help clean this up, but can't seem to edit the page?  Ready to help.  [[User:FNNoonan|FNNoonan]] 15:15, 28 January 2009 (EST)

:Yes, it's pretty weird isn't it. One would have thought that if it was important enough to protect then it would be important enough to update. But the failure to update tells the casual reader what to expect in respect of the general accuracy of the article - so it's probably not a bad thing.--[[User:British_cons|British_cons]] [[User_talk:British_cons|(talk)]] 11:12, 29 January 2009 (EST)

:Yes, it's pretty weird isn't it. One would have thought that if it was important enough to protect then it would be important enough to update. But the failure to update tells the casual reader what to expect in respect of the general accuracy of the article - so it's probably not a bad thing.--[[User:British_cons|British_cons]] [[User_talk:British_cons|(talk)]] 11:12, 29 January 2009 (EST)

::I notice the article has been updated to make it somewhat more reality-based.    Good.  However, I would expect  - almost to the case of 'demand' - that the article on the current POTUS begin with the short and simple line "Barack Hussein Obama is the 44th and current President of the United States of America".  Instead, the first sentence about this, arguably the world's most important person, is overlong, appallingly punctuated, begins immediately with unfounded gossip and wanders off into some other random irrelevant facts and utterly lacks focus.  It says a lot about what the reader can expect from the entire article to follow.  I wish I could help rewrite this article so as it would be more based on fact and reality - and particularly, better written - but as it's locked, that's impossible.  So all we, the casual readers, can do is suggest things which need to be done to improve the article.  I would begin by recommending the deletion of the entire monster and an total rewrite from scratch.  There's nothing here of substance and nothing that will engender any respect for this supposed 'encyclopedia'.  [[User:FNNoonan|FNNoonan]] 13:33, 29 January 2009 (EST)

::I notice the article has been updated to make it somewhat more reality-based.    Good.  However, I would expect  - almost to the case of 'demand' - that the article on the current POTUS begin with the short and simple line "Barack Hussein Obama is the 44th and current President of the United States of America".  Instead, the first sentence about this, arguably the world's most important person, is overlong, appallingly punctuated, begins immediately with unfounded gossip and wanders off into some other random irrelevant facts and utterly lacks focus.  It says a lot about what the reader can expect from the entire article to follow.  I wish I could help rewrite this article so as it would be more based on fact and reality - and particularly, better written - but as it's locked, that's impossible.  So all we, the casual readers, can do is suggest things which need to be done to improve the article.  I would begin by recommending the deletion of the entire monster and a total rewrite from scratch.  There's nothing here of substance and nothing that will engender any respect for this supposed 'encyclopedia'.  [[User:FNNoonan|FNNoonan]] 13:33, 29 January 2009 (EST)

== Real Bible NOT Koran ==

== Real Bible NOT Koran ==