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I think the "despite his illiteracy" in the introduction is a little biased sounding.  It's true he was illiterate, but the way it's put in there makes it seem like it didn't happen that way.  While muslims believe that was a miracle in itself, you could always just put another sentence saying "So-so people doubt this because so-so".  Just to make it less biased.  I would do it, but I wasn't sure exactly if i should because it's a change in tone, although I feel a more neutral one.
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I think the "despite his illiteracy" in the introduction is a little biased sounding.  It's true he was illiterate, but the way it's put in there makes it seem like it didn't happen that way.  While muslims believe that was a miracle in itself, you could always just put another sentence saying "So-so people doubt this because so-so".  Just to make it less biased.  I would do it, but I wasn't sure exactly if i should because it's a change in tone, although I feel a more neutral one.--[[User:Panda|Panda]] 16:32, 17 June 2009 (EDT)
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