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|And he sent them to preach the kingdom of God, and to heal the sick.
 
|And he sent them to preach the kingdom of God, and to heal the sick.
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|And He sent them to proclaim the kingdom of God and to heal to sick.
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|He sent them to proclaim the kingdom of God and to heal to sick.
 
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|And he said unto them, Take nothing for your journey, neither staves, nor scrip, neither bread, neither money; neither have two coats apiece.
 
|And he said unto them, Take nothing for your journey, neither staves, nor scrip, neither bread, neither money; neither have two coats apiece.
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|And He said to them, “Take nothing but the barest of essentials on your travels.  
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|He said to them, “Take nothing but the barest of essentials on your travels.  
 
|Why is the list of items reduced to "nothing but the barest of essentials"?  This seems excessively paraphrastic.
 
|Why is the list of items reduced to "nothing but the barest of essentials"?  This seems excessively paraphrastic.
 
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|And whosoever will not receive you, when ye go out of that city, shake off the very dust from your feet for a testimony against them.
 
|And whosoever will not receive you, when ye go out of that city, shake off the very dust from your feet for a testimony against them.
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|And if the people will not let you stay, when you leave the city, shake the dust off your feet as evidence.”
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|If the people will not let you stay, when you leave the city, shake the dust off your feet as evidence.”
 
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|And they departed, and went through the towns, preaching the gospel, and healing every where.
 
|And they departed, and went through the towns, preaching the gospel, and healing every where.
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|And they departed, going through all the towns, spreading the Truth and healing everywhere.
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|So they departed, going through all the towns, spreading the Truth and healing everywhere.
 
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|And of some, that Elias had appeared; and of others, that one of the old prophets was risen again.
 
|And of some, that Elias had appeared; and of others, that one of the old prophets was risen again.
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|and some that Elijah had reappeared, and others that another of the ancient prophets had been resurrected
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|some that Elijah had reappeared, and others that another of the ancient prophets had been resurrected
 
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|And the apostles, when they were returned, told him all that they had done. And he took them, and went aside privately into a desert place belonging to the city called Bethsaida.
 
|And the apostles, when they were returned, told him all that they had done. And he took them, and went aside privately into a desert place belonging to the city called Bethsaida.
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|And when the apostles returned to Jesus, they told him everything they had done. And He took them with Him, and they went privately into the desert near the city of Bethsaida.
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|When the apostles returned to Jesus, they told him everything they had done. Then He took them with Him, and they went privately into the desert near the city of Bethsaida.
 
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|And the people, when they knew it, followed him: and he received them, and spake unto them of the kingdom of God, and healed them that had need of healing.
 
|And the people, when they knew it, followed him: and he received them, and spake unto them of the kingdom of God, and healed them that had need of healing.
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|And the people, when they discovered this, followed Him there, and so He met them, and spoke to them about the Kingdom of God, and healed those of them that were unwell.
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|The people, when they discovered this, followed Him there, and so He met them, and spoke to them about the Kingdom of God, and healed those of them that were unwell.
 
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|And when the day began to wear away, then came the twelve, and said unto him, Send the multitude away, that they may go into the towns and country round about, and lodge, and get victuals: for we are here in a desert place.
 
|And when the day began to wear away, then came the twelve, and said unto him, Send the multitude away, that they may go into the towns and country round about, and lodge, and get victuals: for we are here in a desert place.
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|And as the day drew to an end, His twelve best students came up to Him, and said, “Send the crowd away, so that they can go into the settlements near here, to find food and a place to sleep, because we are in a desert here.”
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|As the day drew to an end, His twelve best students came up to Him, and said, “Send the crowd away, so that they can go into the settlements near here, to find food and a place to sleep, because we are in a desert here.”
 
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|For they were about five thousand men. And he said to his disciples, Make them sit down by fifties in a company.
 
|For they were about five thousand men. And he said to his disciples, Make them sit down by fifties in a company.
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|And there were about five thousand men in that place. So Jesus said to His students, “Make them sit down in groups of fifty.”
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|For there were about five thousand men in that place. So Jesus said to His students, “Make them sit down in groups of fifty.”
 
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|And they did so, and made them all sit down.
 
|And they did so, and made them all sit down.
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|And he straitly charged them, and commanded them to tell no man that thing;
 
|And he straitly charged them, and commanded them to tell no man that thing;
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|And Jesus warned and commanded them not to tell anyone this.
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|Then Jesus warned and commanded them not to tell anyone this.
 
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|And as he prayed, the fashion of his countenance was altered, and his raiment was white and glistering.
 
|And as he prayed, the fashion of his countenance was altered, and his raiment was white and glistering.
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|And as He prayed, His face seemed to change, and his clothing shone white.
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|As He prayed, His face seemed to change, and his clothing shone white.
 
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|And it came to pass, as they departed from him, Peter said unto Jesus, Master, it is good for us to be here: and let us make three tabernacles; one for thee, and one for Moses, and one for Elias: not knowing what he said.
 
|And it came to pass, as they departed from him, Peter said unto Jesus, Master, it is good for us to be here: and let us make three tabernacles; one for thee, and one for Moses, and one for Elias: not knowing what he said.
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|And as the men were leaving, Peter said to Jesus, “Teacher, it is good that we are here, let us build three shrines, one for You, one for Moses and one for Elijah,” for Peter did not know what he was saying.
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|As the men were leaving, Peter said to Jesus, “Teacher, it is good that we are here, let us build three shrines, one for You, one for Moses and one for Elijah,” for Peter did not know what he was saying.
 
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|And when the voice was past, Jesus was found alone. And they kept it close, and told no man in those days any of those things which they had seen.
 
|And when the voice was past, Jesus was found alone. And they kept it close, and told no man in those days any of those things which they had seen.
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|And when the voice had spoken, they saw that Jesus was alone. The students kept this secret, and told no man what they had seen.
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|When the voice had spoken, they saw that Jesus was alone. The students kept this secret, and told no man what they had seen.
 
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|And, behold, a man of the company cried out, saying, Master, I beseech thee, look upon my son: for he is mine only child.
 
|And, behold, a man of the company cried out, saying, Master, I beseech thee, look upon my son: for he is mine only child.
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|And one of the men called out, “Teacher, please, look at my son, because he is my only child.
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|One of the men called out, “Teacher, please, look at my son, because he is my only child.
 
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|And I besought thy disciples to cast him out; and they could not.
 
|And I besought thy disciples to cast him out; and they could not.
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|And I asked your students to expelled the demon, but they could not.”
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|I asked your students to expelled the demon, but they could not.”
 
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|And Jesus answering said, O faithless and perverse generation, how long shall I be with you, and suffer you? Bring thy son hither.
 
|And Jesus answering said, O faithless and perverse generation, how long shall I be with you, and suffer you? Bring thy son hither.
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|And Jesus answered, “You unbelieving and disobedient generation, how long will I have to put up with you? Bring your son here.”
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|Jesus answered, “You unbelieving and disobedient generation, how long will I have to put up with you? Bring your son here.”
 
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|And as he was yet a coming, the devil threw him down, and tare him. And Jesus rebuked the unclean spirit, and healed the child, and delivered him again to his father.
 
|And as he was yet a coming, the devil threw him down, and tare him. And Jesus rebuked the unclean spirit, and healed the child, and delivered him again to his father.
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|And as he was coming, the demon threw him to the ground and injured him. And Jesus expelled the demon, healed the child, and gave him back to his father.
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|So as he was coming, the demon threw him to the ground and injured him. And Jesus expelled the demon, healed the child, and gave him back to his father.
 
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|And Jesus, perceiving the thought of their heart, took a child, and set him by him,
 
|And Jesus, perceiving the thought of their heart, took a child, and set him by him,
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|Then Jesus, seeing what they were thinking, had a child stand beside Him.
 
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|And said unto them, Whosoever shall receive this child in my name receiveth me: and whosoever shall receive me receiveth him that sent me: for he that is least among you all, the same shall be great.
 
|And said unto them, Whosoever shall receive this child in my name receiveth me: and whosoever shall receive me receiveth him that sent me: for he that is least among you all, the same shall be great.
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|And He said to them, “Whoever receives this child in My name receives Me, and whoever receives Me receives Him that sent Me. The one who is the least important of you, he will be the greatest.”
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|He said to them, “Whoever receives this child in My name receives Me, and whoever receives Me receives Him that sent Me. The one who is the least important of you, he will be the greatest.”
 
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