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|And he said unto them, Take nothing for your journey, neither staves, nor scrip, neither bread, neither money; neither have two coats apiece.
 
|And he said unto them, Take nothing for your journey, neither staves, nor scrip, neither bread, neither money; neither have two coats apiece.
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|He said to them, “Take nothing but the barest of essentials on your travels.  
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|He said to them, “Take nothing but the barest of essentials on your travels, not a stick, bag, food, money or a spare coat.  
 
|Why is the list of items reduced to "nothing but the barest of essentials"?  This seems excessively paraphrastic.
 
|Why is the list of items reduced to "nothing but the barest of essentials"?  This seems excessively paraphrastic.
 
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|And whatsoever house ye enter into, there abide, and thence depart.
 
|And whatsoever house ye enter into, there abide, and thence depart.
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|And if anyone invites you into their house, stay there until you leave that town.
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|And whatever house you enter, stay there until you leave that town.
 
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