Chapter 12: "The lord of that custodian" - seems awkward and archaic. Any thoughts?--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 12:42, 30 January 2010 (EST) | Chapter 12: "The lord of that custodian" - seems awkward and archaic. Any thoughts?--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 12:42, 30 January 2010 (EST) |