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Chapter 12: "The lord of that custodian" - seems awkward and archaic.  Any thoughts?--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 12:42, 30 January 2010 (EST)
 
Chapter 12: "The lord of that custodian" - seems awkward and archaic.  Any thoughts?--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 12:42, 30 January 2010 (EST)
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:Perhaps change custodian to "supervisor", (seems to get across that he's in charge of the work, but not the owner) and lord to "employer" or "businessman" or "owner" as each context requires, since lord used to refer to simply any landowner hiring people. [[User:DouglasA|DouglasA]] 13:30, 30 January 2010 (EST)
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