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|Let him kiss me with the kisses of his mouth: for thy love is better than wine.  

|Let him kiss me with the kisses of his mouth: for thy love is better than wine.  

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|Kiss me with your mouth: because your love is better then wine

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|it is clear the woman has begun speaking. she is a country girl (shulamite maiden)

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|Because of the savour of thy good ointments thy name is as ointment poured forth, therefore do the virgins love thee.  

|Because of the savour of thy good ointments thy name is as ointment poured forth, therefore do the virgins love thee.  

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|"the virgins" refers to other maidens

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|Look not upon me, because I am black, because the sun hath looked upon me: my mother's children were angry with me; they made me the keeper of the vineyards; but mine own vineyard have I not kept.  

|Look not upon me, because I am black, because the sun hath looked upon me: my mother's children were angry with me; they made me the keeper of the vineyards; but mine own vineyard have I not kept.  

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|Don't look down on me because i am tanned, the sun tanned me: my family were angry at me; they made me the keeper of the vineyards; however i haven't taken care of my own vineyards!

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==Chapter 2==

==Chapter 2==