::Greetings, Ed. Your comment about making it understandable to people who completely skipped plane geometry certainly raises the bar in terms of the amount of work I have to do. I accept the challenge, but it will take a while. By those standards, you're absolutely right in that it isn't well written. But at least it no longer contains deliberately inserted errors. BTW, the article goes off in more directions than I had remembered. But I accept the challenge. (Also, didn't you say somewhere that ''you'' skipped plane geometry? That raises the bar even further.) [[User:SamHB|SamHB]] 15:56, 13 November 2010 (EST) | ::Greetings, Ed. Your comment about making it understandable to people who completely skipped plane geometry certainly raises the bar in terms of the amount of work I have to do. I accept the challenge, but it will take a while. By those standards, you're absolutely right in that it isn't well written. But at least it no longer contains deliberately inserted errors. BTW, the article goes off in more directions than I had remembered. But I accept the challenge. (Also, didn't you say somewhere that ''you'' skipped plane geometry? That raises the bar even further.) [[User:SamHB|SamHB]] 15:56, 13 November 2010 (EST) |