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A good balanced rational article, tho' it does need more information.
A good balanced rational article, tho' it does need more information.
==Second paragraph==
As stands, it is
"Born and raised on the south side of Chicago, Michelle Obama's roots, has a complex path from Slavery: Fraser Robinson III (died in 1991) and his wife, Marian are the parents of Michelle; they got married in 1960; Melvinia Shields, the enslaved and illiterate young girl, and the unknown white man who impregnated her are the great-great-great-grandparents of Michelle Obama, the first lady... the more complete map of Mrs. Obama’s ancestors — including the slave mother, white father and their biracial son, Dolphus T. Shields — connects the first African-American first lady to the history of slavery, tracing their five-generation journey from bondage to a front-row seat to the presidency. [1] (Dolphus Shields was a very light skinned, church-going carpenter who could read, write and advance in an industrializing town.) Some of Michelle's relatives still reside in South Carolina."
To me this is confusing and gets in the way of the article. Can someone who understands exactly what this paragraph is saying create a more clear version?
[[User:KingHanksley|KingHanksley]] 17:51, 3 May 2011 (EDT)
==Court Ordered Inactive Status by a Disciplinary Agency==
==Court Ordered Inactive Status by a Disciplinary Agency==