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In all of the articles, Wicca is mentioned as a feature of one of the participants and has no bearing on the actual event or the crime was carried out by someone with undeniably clear mental health problems in which case their religious views are irrelevant.
 
In all of the articles, Wicca is mentioned as a feature of one of the participants and has no bearing on the actual event or the crime was carried out by someone with undeniably clear mental health problems in which case their religious views are irrelevant.
 
HarabecW
 
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:You do have a valid point.  What could you do to improve the article overall?  The following needs to be addressed: what is it about? How many practice it?  How do they practice it?  The history.  Is it related to witchcraft?  Things like that to make it a complete and better article.  [[User:Karajou|Karajou]] 20:30, 7 May 2011 (EDT)
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Made the introduction more readable and removed weasel words. Corrected some spelling and punctuation issues. -HarabecW
 
Made the introduction more readable and removed weasel words. Corrected some spelling and punctuation issues. -HarabecW
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