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Line 141: − Foget about how old the moon is. Article needs substantial changes, mainly for stylistic reasons. Currently (7 APRIL, 2007 AD)springs current scientific theory half way thru article, which is not a good pedagogical technique. (But then neither is employing "pedagogical" when "educational" would have sufficed.)Here below are the first 2 pars as I see them. If no one objects, I will put them when next I am around these parts.+ +
→swap article and discussion pages for superior treatment, more fun
"Look at the moon, look at the moon...." (from HAIR)
"Look at the moon, look at the moon...." (from HAIR)
Forget about how old the moon is. Article needs substantial changes, mainly for stylistic reasons. Currently (7 APRIL, 2007 AD)article springs current scientific theory half way thru, which is not a good pedagogical technique.(But then neither is employing "pedagogical" when "educational" would have sufficed.)Here below are the first 2 pars as I see them. If no one objects, I will put them when next I am around these parts.
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