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Is the phrase "It is very frightening" really appropriate for inclusion, especially in the first paragraph of this article? While I appreciate what you're saying, I think perhaps phrasing it as "It was written to be a terrifying view of Hell" or something similar would be a better way of phrasing it. I would have made the change but thought I'd better check with someone first. RightSaysNick Nick Bowler 17:48 (GMT) 21 Nov 2009
Is the phrase "It is very frightening" really appropriate for inclusion, especially in the first paragraph of this article? While I appreciate what you're saying, I think perhaps phrasing it as "It was written to be a terrifying view of Hell" or something similar would be a better way of phrasing it. I would have made the change but thought I'd better check with someone first. RightSaysNick Nick Bowler 17:48 (GMT) 21 Nov 2009
:I agree with Nick. I'll make the change.--[[User:CPalmer|CPalmer]] 09:10, 5 July 2012 (EDT)