Talk:Haiku

Good start, for a schoolboy. Now, try to make something students could respect as a reference. --Ed Poor 16:00, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

Bah. I hate seeing people mangling the haiku form. There is much more to it than 5 7 5. --Mtur 15:57, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

George W. Bush/ Consevapedia says/ Liberals hate us. Sevenstring 23:35, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

You lack the three distinct concepts, the seasonal word, and the general theme of nature. --Mtur 23:41, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

At least I have a sense of humour. Lighten up. Sevenstring 23:43, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

You are instead looking for a senryu which is instead concerned with human foibles. --Mtur 23:50, 29 March 2007 (EDT)