Talk:Third rail
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Grammar
I believe that the grammar was already correct, and that JoaquÃn MartÃnez's change made it incorrect. Please explain why I am wrong. Philip J. Rayment 18:26, 23 November 2007 (EST)
The first sentence is far and away the worst sentence i have ever read. âThe preceding unsigned comment was added by Ezekiel1310 (talk)
- Aw, come on, it's not that bad, is it? How would you propose that it should read? Please just rewrite it if you can do better. We can always revert if we really disagree. :-) Philip J. Rayment 18:49, 23 November 2007 (EST)