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Talk:Essay:Quantifying Mental Strength

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good points, will do
::: Physical fitness is a good thing. Mental fitness would be even better. I don't see how the alternatives would be improvements.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 19:38, 19 October 2008 (EDT)
::::Right now it reads as if our society thrives off the quantifying of physical fitness, not off the actual physical fitness. I understand your point, but it is hidden within the second half of your second sentence. Perhaps a better way of saying it would be "Our society thrives on our physical fitness and mental fitness. To help us improve our physical fitness, we quantify our physical strength [then the list of how we do it]. It is long overdue to create a similar system for mental fitness: ----[[User:ToJones|ToJones]] 19:42, 19 October 2008 (EDT)
 
::::: OK, good point. Will add now.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 20:21, 19 October 2008 (EDT)
:The second half is approaches to improving mental strength? Maybe change section heading to reflect this? The way the article is now that section should be approaches to quantifying mental strength. Just change heading to "Approaches to Improving Mental Strength" ? ----[[User:ToJones|ToJones]] 20:04, 19 October 2008 (EDT)
 
:: Good suggestion. Will do.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 20:21, 19 October 2008 (EDT)
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