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July 12, 2016
May 20, 2009
May 19, 2009
rewrite
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don't say "controversial" as a euphemism for moral objections: controversy means two opposing views - not one opposing view!
-15
May 10, 2009
correcting typo and capitalization
m→Themes: spelling
+1
→Themes: clarity
+11
→Themes: caps - addition and removal.
-1
→Plot: lower case 'm', tense, punctuation
+1
→Plot: sentence inside parenthesis; reword for clarity
→Plot: grammar/tense
-1
→Plot: capitalize AIDS
→Plot: spell out number, lower case 'g'
+4
→Plot: comma
+1