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→Yuck: Peter, would you mind re-phrasing that? The author might be literate enough to take offense
== Yuck ==
== Yuck ==
This article looks like it was written by a semi-literate child copying from a pamphlet. It could use a very thorough re-write from an expert.
This article <s>looks like it was written by a semi-literate child copying from a pamphlet. It</s> could use a very thorough re-write from an expert.
[[User:Palmd001|Palmd001]] 20:12, 18 March 2007 (EDT)
[[User:Palmd001|Palmd001]] 20:12, 18 March 2007 (EDT)