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→Taking out redundant sentence
Now it's true that the longer intro paragraph was more "full", but that's only because it had the redundant sentence. I think the intro that I have left is full enough. It has "nonsensical", and it has the famous "claptrap" sentence. This must be the intro that you want. OK? [[User:SamHB|SamHB]] 00:47, 11 June 2015 (EDT)
Now it's true that the longer intro paragraph was more "full", but that's only because it had the redundant sentence. I think the intro that I have left is full enough. It has "nonsensical", and it has the famous "claptrap" sentence. This must be the intro that you want. OK? [[User:SamHB|SamHB]] 00:47, 11 June 2015 (EDT)
:You did more than just that. [[User:VargasMilan|VargasMilan]] 23:47, 11 June 2015 (EDT)