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| − | I have two suggestions for the introduction: 1) explain the difference between [[Atheism]] and [[Agnosticism]]; 2) add summaries about causal factors, historical events, and effects, instead of "will be addressed" and "will also be covered". [[User:Missionary|Missionary]] 12:14, 22 February 2015 (EST)
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| − | :There are many causal factors to atheism so I linked to this article in the introduction: [[Causes of atheism]].
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| − | :Second, I don't want to do too much in the introduction so keeping it the way it is. However, I did just add a link to the article [[definition of atheism]] fairly early in the article. [[User:Conservative|Conservative]] 20:58, 21 April 2015 (EDT)
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| − | ::The effects and some of the historical events related to atheism is covered in the second paragraph of this atheism article. There is a sentence in the second paragraph which reads: "Atheism has been examined by many disciplines in terms [[Atheism statistics|of its effects]] on individuals and society and these effects will be covered shortly." When you click on the words "of its effects" in that sentence, the article will take you to the [[Atheism statistics]] article which covers some of the effects/history of atheism. Plus, the "Atheism statistics" article links to Conservapedia's [[History of Atheism|History of atheism]] article and articles related to the history of atheism. [[User:Conservative|Conservative]] 14:23, 20 July 2015 (EDT)
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| − | :::Missionary, I partly implemented your first suggestion today and did it in a concise way that keeps the flow of the article going. I linked to the [[Definition of atheism]] article within the second sentence which explains things further.
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| − | :::In addition, fairly soon in the article, resources on the agnosticism/atheism issue is now given. [[User:Conservative|Conservative]] ([[User talk:Conservative|talk]]) 19:42, 22 September 2015 (EDT)
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| | == Video about our atheism article == | | == Video about our atheism article == |