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== "Kerry's fellow soldiers" ==
 
== "Kerry's fellow soldiers" ==
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This article seems to take the accusations of the "Swift Boat Veterans For Truth" at face value, for instance saying that he "went to great lengths" to be given his purple hearts, which is not simply editorializing but specifically repeating a charge by the group, who has themselves been rebuffed publically on many of their claims.  Also, the phrasing "Kerry's Fellow Soldiers" is rather misleading, as while all these people were in the same military at the same time as Kerry, none of the "Swifties" actually served with Kerry.  Its true, but leaves a deliberately incorrect impression.  Its rather like saying "Some of Kerry's fellow Americans have accused him of being 'French-Looking.'"
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This article seems to take the accusations of the "Swift Boat Veterans For Truth" at face value, for instance saying that he "went to great lengths" to be given his purple hearts, which is not simply editorializing but specifically repeating a charge by the group, who has themselves been rebuffed publically on many of their claims.  Also, the phrasing "Kerry's Fellow Soldiers" is rather misleading, as while all these people were in the same military at the same time as Kerry, none of the "Swifties" actually served with Kerry.  Its true, but leaves a deliberately incorrect impression.  Its rather like saying "Some of Kerry's fellow Americans have accused him of being 'French-Looking.'"--[[User:RexMundane|RexMundane]] 14:00, 20 April 2007 (EDT)
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