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Undo comment removal by Terryeo. This concern needs to be addressed publicly.
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I'm new here but know some of the scientology philosophy.  The article used to read:
 
I'm new here but know some of the scientology philosophy.  The article used to read:
 
* Scientology is a controversial religion founded by science fiction writer Lafayette Ron Hubbard, based upon his self-help program of Dianetics. Its basic teaching is that all humans suffering comes from repressed traumatic memories, sometimes dating back to previous lifetimes, and that these memories of Xenu can be 'cleared' through a lengthy (and expensive) form of church therapy. Human souls are known as "Thetans".<br />  I removed the "all" of "all human suffering" because a person might knowingly wish to temporarily suffer, to some degree, in a situation toward a greater good.  An example of that would be a minister living in primitive conditions, for example.  So "all" human suffering could not be the result of past memories.  The article also said something which implied all suffering came from a particular, long past memory which isn't at all what scientology proposes.  I removed that word.  Also, there are several ways a person can go about the Church's "therapy" and not all of them are expensive.  But buying professional auditing can be expensive.  Another method is co-auditing with a partner, it is significantly less expensive.  A third method is to work within the Church, in which situation auditing is often given as a bonus. [[User:Terryeo|Terryeo]] 18:27, 12 March 2007 (EDT)
 
* Scientology is a controversial religion founded by science fiction writer Lafayette Ron Hubbard, based upon his self-help program of Dianetics. Its basic teaching is that all humans suffering comes from repressed traumatic memories, sometimes dating back to previous lifetimes, and that these memories of Xenu can be 'cleared' through a lengthy (and expensive) form of church therapy. Human souls are known as "Thetans".<br />  I removed the "all" of "all human suffering" because a person might knowingly wish to temporarily suffer, to some degree, in a situation toward a greater good.  An example of that would be a minister living in primitive conditions, for example.  So "all" human suffering could not be the result of past memories.  The article also said something which implied all suffering came from a particular, long past memory which isn't at all what scientology proposes.  I removed that word.  Also, there are several ways a person can go about the Church's "therapy" and not all of them are expensive.  But buying professional auditing can be expensive.  Another method is co-auditing with a partner, it is significantly less expensive.  A third method is to work within the Church, in which situation auditing is often given as a bonus. [[User:Terryeo|Terryeo]] 18:27, 12 March 2007 (EDT)
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== Terryeo ==
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It doesn't take much looking through edit history here to see that by far the most significent contributor to the article is Terryeo, and that his edits consist almost entirely of downplaying or removing anything critical of scientology. I do not wish to create a fuss over this, but personally, I question his impartiality in this instance. Further, a check of his user-talk page shows he is the center of quite a debate regarding this article, and only this article.
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Some sections in the comments also make wonder if he may be a scientologist himself, most notably when he responds to a claim that scientology takes large sums of money from its members with "My experience has been very very different." Being a member would, obviously, be a clear source of bias that may render his editing of this article questionable.
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I considered contacting a burocrat, but consider it polite to first state my concerns here so he may have a chance to defend himself. I hope my accusations do not lead to any unpleasantness.
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--BornAgainBrit
    
== Biasing a solid article ==
 
== Biasing a solid article ==
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