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:By the way, I've put in a comma for you.  Without it, the phrase "another and more" can lead to various difficult parsings.  It's a compound sentence (each part has its own verb—"shares" and "be given"—so the parts need to be separated by a comma.

:By the way, I've put in a comma for you.  Without it, the phrase "another and more" can lead to various difficult parsings.  It's a compound sentence (each part has its own verb—"shares" and "be given"—so the parts need to be separated by a comma.

:Please don't take offense.  You know that I have high (and not always tactfully expressed) standards.  I hold you to those high standards because I know you are trying to express yourself articulately, and you sometimes miss the mark.  I consider many other people here to be hopeless (hence the "fire and brimstone"), so I don't bother.  For example, I wouldn't know what to say to "AK" that could possible make his writing comprehensible.  Except to sign up for a class in English as a second language.  [[User:SamHB|SamHB]] ([[User talk:SamHB|talk]]) 17:56, 8 May 2016 (EDT)

:Please don't take offense.  You know that I have high (and not always tactfully expressed) standards.  I hold you to those high standards because I know you are trying to express yourself articulately, and you sometimes miss the mark.  I consider many other people here to be hopeless (hence the "fire and brimstone"), so I don't bother.  For example, I wouldn't know what to say to "AK" that could possible make his writing comprehensible.  Except perhaps to sign up for a class in English as a second language.  [[User:SamHB|SamHB]] ([[User talk:SamHB|talk]]) 17:56, 8 May 2016 (EDT)