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Verb number should agree with the number of the subject in a sentence. I would fix the first sentence, but, well.... And for the sake of parallelism, the evolutionary age of the universe should also be included.--[[User:All Fish Welcome|All Fish Welcome]] 18:08, 20 April 2007 (EDT)
 
Verb number should agree with the number of the subject in a sentence. I would fix the first sentence, but, well.... And for the sake of parallelism, the evolutionary age of the universe should also be included.--[[User:All Fish Welcome|All Fish Welcome]] 18:08, 20 April 2007 (EDT)
 
:I've fixed the first sentence; thanks for pointing that out.  The evolutionary age of the Earth ''is'' included, in the first sentence; I don't follow what you are getting at there.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 19:52, 20 April 2007 (EDT)
 
:I've fixed the first sentence; thanks for pointing that out.  The evolutionary age of the Earth ''is'' included, in the first sentence; I don't follow what you are getting at there.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 19:52, 20 April 2007 (EDT)
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::I guess you figured it out, since you added the age of the universe on 21 April.--[[User:All Fish Welcome|All Fish Welcome]] 00:27, 23 April 2007 (EDT)

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