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2) Christopher Columbus was an inspiration in many ways, he was a devout christian and by the christian faith was inspired to change the world. His determination to succeed was incredible and shows just how courageous he really was.  
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2) Christopher Columbus was an inspiration in many ways, he was a devout Christian and by the Christian faith was inspired to change the world. His determination to succeed was incredible and shows just how courageous he really was.  
    
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4) When the Pilgrims and Puritans settled in Massachusetts they were not happy with the direction the church of England was headed. Both felt as if it was becoming to close to the Catholic religion. Therefore the Pilgrims separated themselves completely from the church with hopes to have more freedom of religion, while the puritans stayed within the church to purify it.
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4) When the Pilgrims and Puritans settled in Massachusetts they were not happy with the direction the church of England was headed. Both felt as if it was becoming to close to the Catholic religion. Therefore, the Pilgrims separated themselves completely from the church with hopes to have more freedom of religion, while the puritans stayed within the church to purify it.
    
: Say "too", not "to".  Otherwise excellent.
 
: Say "too", not "to".  Otherwise excellent.
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5) William Penn was truly a remarkable person. He stood up for his own belief by going against the English Law, and was arrested for doing so. Later on he was granted what is today Pennsylvania which he based off of one principle only: religious freedom for all.       
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5) William Penn was truly a remarkable person. He stood up for his own belief by going against the English Law, and was arrested for doing so. Later on he was granted what is today Pennsylvania which he based on one principle only: religious freedom for all.       
    
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: Conclusion does not follow.  Puritans wanted freedom for their own religion, and that doesn't mean they wanted freedom for others.  (Minus 1).
 
: Conclusion does not follow.  Puritans wanted freedom for their own religion, and that doesn't mean they wanted freedom for others.  (Minus 1).
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H1) "What, if anything, was the significance of Bacon's Rebellion?"-I believe that Bacon's Rebellion was extremely significant. Nathanial Bacon was a Virginia settler, and a simple man, who did not agree with how the government was handling things in Virginia. Therefore he went up against the high authorities of the government to fight for what he believed was right. He lead a rebellion to take back the power from governing authorities and place it back in the hands of the people.     
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H1) "What, if anything, was the significance of Bacon's Rebellion?"-I believe that Bacon's Rebellion was extremely significant. Nathanial Bacon was a Virginia settler, and a simple man, who did not agree with how the government was handling things in Virginia. Therefore, he went up against the high authorities of the government to fight for what he believed was right. He lead a rebellion to take back the power from governing authorities and place it back in the hands of the people.     
    
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