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I find that the discussion on this page on David's battle with Goliath, and the general text in general, is far too long and needs to be made more concise. I already redid the part on David's historicity, adding relevant sources etc. I plan to do further edits in the future and add a section on the historicity of David's kingdom. --Unsigned comment by [[User:Korvex]]
I find that the discussion on this page on David's battle with Goliath, and the general text in general, is far too long and needs to be made more concise. I already redid the part on David's historicity, adding relevant sources etc. I plan to do further edits in the future and add a section on the historicity of David's kingdom. --Unsigned comment by [[User:Korvex]]
:I like the detail on David's life. It's good to see a detailed article on Conservapedia. If you can find a way to make the article more concise ''without'' actually removing information, I would really appreciate that, though. Thanks for the edits you have already done, regardless. --[[User:1990'sguy|1990'sguy]] ([[User talk:1990'sguy|talk]]) 22:22, 17 April 2017 (EDT)
:I like the detail on David's life. It's good to see a detailed article on Conservapedia. If you can find a way to make the article more concise ''without'' actually removing information, I would really appreciate that, though. Thanks for the edits you have already done, regardless. --[[User:1990'sguy|1990'sguy]] ([[User talk:1990'sguy|talk]]) 22:22, 17 April 2017 (EDT)
:: That's what I'm going to try to work on -- making it more concise. It would be much more beneficial for conservapedia editors to add information here and there on different articles, instead of overdoing some articles and leaving others very empty.[[User:Korvex|Korvex]] ([[User talk:Korvex|talk]]) 16:27, 18 April 2017 (EDT)