Block, Siteadmin, SkipCaptcha, Upload, Automoderated users, delete, edit, move, nsTeam2RO, nsTeam2RW, nsTeam2_talkRO, nsTeam2_talkRW, protect, rollback, Administrators, template
295,143
edits
Changes
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
Line 18:
Line 18: − +
Talk:Foreign Intelligence Surveillance Act (view source)
Revision as of 15:23, September 19, 2018
, 15:23, September 19, 2018→Structural overhaul
IMO, this page needs a structural overhaul. It should be divided into three sections: (1) basic outline of the law; (2) criticisms, reform efforts, and proposals; (3) Obama abuses.
IMO, this page needs a structural overhaul. It should be divided into three sections: (1) basic outline of the law; (2) criticisms, reform efforts, and proposals; (3) Obama abuses.
Right now, elements outlining recent events are mixed into the Intro, which makes it look and sound like a partisan as attack piece. While Obama's abuses are undeniable and outrageous, the basic structure of the page should be educational about what the law is, and efforts to reform it. A separate Obama abuse section will make it clear why reform is necessary, and if not, why the law should be scrapped. Comments? [[User:RobSmith|RobS]]<sup>[[User talk:RobSmith|''Deep Six the Deep State!'']]</sup> 11:22, 19 September 2018 (EDT)
Right now, elements outlining recent events are mixed into the Intro, which makes it look and sound like a partisan attack piece. While Obama's abuses are undeniable and outrageous, the basic structure of the page should be educational about what the law is, and efforts to reform it. A separate Obama abuse section will make it clear why reform is necessary, and if not, why the law should be scrapped. Comments? [[User:RobSmith|RobS]]<sup>[[User talk:RobSmith|''Deep Six the Deep State!'']]</sup> 11:22, 19 September 2018 (EDT)