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'''Hiroshima''' is an industrial city in [[Japan]], most famous for being the target of the first [[atomic bomb|atomic weapon]] used in [[war]]fare, just prior to the Japanese [[surrender]] at the end of [[World War Two]].  The surrender came quickly after the [[United States]] made the point that they were serious, by dropping another one on [[Nagasaki]], which was, so far, the last use of these weapons.

'''Hiroshima''' is an industrial city in [[Japan]], most famous for being the target of the first [[atomic bomb|atomic weapon]] used in [[war]]fare, just prior to the Japanese [[surrender]] at the end of [[World War Two]].  The surrender came quickly after the [[United States]] made the point that they were serious, by dropping another one on [[Nagasaki]], which was, so far, the last use of these weapons.