IMO, the Intro needs to be trimmed down and simplified. The pious intellectual moralizing can be put elsewhere. Our primary readership is children. We should encourage trust in God, not turn it into an intellectual exercise (which granted, many children as well as adults, will never understand). [[User:RobSmith|RobS]]<sup>[[User talk:RobSmith|De Plorabus Unum]]</sup> 18:22, 8 November 2019 (EST) | IMO, the Intro needs to be trimmed down and simplified. The pious intellectual moralizing can be put elsewhere. Our primary readership is children. We should encourage trust in God, not turn it into an intellectual exercise (which granted, many children as well as adults, will never understand). [[User:RobSmith|RobS]]<sup>[[User talk:RobSmith|De Plorabus Unum]]</sup> 18:22, 8 November 2019 (EST) |