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Melodie
Melodie
:I've put Fingermouse's version in, without alteration. I didn't feel that Melodie's additional word was warranted, as the sentence was already qualified by the word "consider"; it didn't need repeating.
:Not that I think this introduction is perfect, but I agree that it is better than what it replaced. Hopefully others will make further suggestions regarding it.
:[[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 02:57, 26 May 2007 (EDT)