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"Calvin received an excellent education." From where? Why is it excellent? Why is this statement even being made?
"Calvin received an excellent education." From where? Why is it excellent? Why is this statement even being made?
You shouldn't have to in-line explain tonsuring. It's off subject, and needs its own entry if you relaly want to talk about it.
You shouldn't have to in-line explain tonsuring. It's off subject, and needs its own entry if you really want to talk about it.
"Eventually the Protestant thinkers at the University won Calvin to their way of thinking". 'Won to' is awkward/amateurish sounding. It doesn't make any sense.
"Eventually the Protestant thinkers at the University won Calvin to their way of thinking". 'Won to' is awkward/amateurish sounding. It doesn't make any sense.