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:I have no knowledge of the Baldwin quote, whether it is true or not, but I followed the link that “supports” it, and noticed that the quote does not appear on the page the link takes me to.  I’ve done a quick search for the quote and the only things I turn up are blogs that cite it as an example of “how funny” this site is, and posts that also cite the page linked from the article.  That is, I can find no support for this quote at all.  I would simply delete the quote as a fabrication, but, since the article is newly unlocked, I don’t want to be hasty in editing it.  Can anyone find this quote in a reputable source?  (I should note I don’t have access, at the moment, to the source supporting the alternative version of the quote, but I can’t find it attested to on any website.)--[[User:Reginod|Reginod]] 20:11, 7 March 2007 (EST)
 
:I have no knowledge of the Baldwin quote, whether it is true or not, but I followed the link that “supports” it, and noticed that the quote does not appear on the page the link takes me to.  I’ve done a quick search for the quote and the only things I turn up are blogs that cite it as an example of “how funny” this site is, and posts that also cite the page linked from the article.  That is, I can find no support for this quote at all.  I would simply delete the quote as a fabrication, but, since the article is newly unlocked, I don’t want to be hasty in editing it.  Can anyone find this quote in a reputable source?  (I should note I don’t have access, at the moment, to the source supporting the alternative version of the quote, but I can’t find it attested to on any website.)--[[User:Reginod|Reginod]] 20:11, 7 March 2007 (EST)
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==Basic Writing Errors==
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-"More typical of ACLU litigation was when attorneys on its side demanded over $2 million" There is a tense change here.  Fix it.
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-There's no need to mention that Roger Baldwin is non-Christian; it's 100% inconsequential.
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--[[User:WOVcenter|WOVcenter]] 12:45, 8 March 2007 (EST)
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