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:I don't see the suggested wording as being a whole lot better.  Two points in particular:
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:* "It was possible for those who did not practice witchcraft to be falsely accused".  Wow!  It's possible for anybody to be falsely accused of anything.  That sentence doesn't really say much.
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:* There is still no citation for the "tens of thousands".
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:[[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 01:18, 30 June 2007 (EDT)
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