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==Maintain the neutrality of the article==
 
==Maintain the neutrality of the article==
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George W. Bush had an abortion
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Reading through this article, nearly 1/3 of all the sentences cite a 'fact' yet have no reference. And because it is edit-locked, a mod with a true notion of what it is to create informative articles needs to go over this with a fine tooth comb.--[[User:Nosferatu.feuertote|Nosferatu.feuertote]] 21:18, 16 March 2007 (EDT)
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God created man and man made abortion so abortion is good
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I cannot help but notice that of the TWO citations noted after the claim that abortion is a "billion dollar industry", neither of the linked "references" make any claims about the value of the "abortion industry". I am NOT pro-abortion, however I am PRO-FACT. If you make a claim and list citations directly afterwards, THOSE CITATIONS SHOULD DIRECTLY VERIFY THE CLAIM YOU HAVE JUST MADE! A quote from the first "source":
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Republicans say this law is being violated in the interest of making money, although they did not provide specific numbers or incidents.
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The second "source makes absolutely no mention of any revenues, potential or actual.
    
Brian
 
Brian
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"The father of medicine, Hippocrates, expressly prohibited abortion in his ethical Oath long before Christianity."  Is a bit weasly.  Hippocrates also would not perform surgery, and definitely interfering with the heart was out of the question.  But we know how many people are prevented from dying through heart-surgery.  I fail to see the relevance of mentioning the oath in the first paragraph.  [[User:Teji|Teji]] 15:32, 6 April 2007 (EDT)
    
=="This is Conservapedia"==
 
=="This is Conservapedia"==
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