:I moved some of the stuff from the introduction to deeper into the article. My personal preference is to have a concise definition in the introduction and then expand more down below. Also, while it doesn't seem like it's opinion to say that Canada's health care sucks, some people still disagree. So at least for now I gave some of the opinion attribution. I'm trying to keep it as neutrally biased as possible, without making it sound like I'm pandering to liberals (or conservatives, for that matter). And who knows, I will probably change it around throughout the day anyways. | :I moved some of the stuff from the introduction to deeper into the article. My personal preference is to have a concise definition in the introduction and then expand more down below. Also, while it doesn't seem like it's opinion to say that Canada's health care sucks, some people still disagree. So at least for now I gave some of the opinion attribution. I'm trying to keep it as neutrally biased as possible, without making it sound like I'm pandering to liberals (or conservatives, for that matter). And who knows, I will probably change it around throughout the day anyways. |