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[[User:Pachyderm|Pachyderm]] 10:41, 31 August 2007 (EDT)
[[User:Pachyderm|Pachyderm]] 10:41, 31 August 2007 (EDT)
==Re-write Opening Sentence==
"In less than the past 100 years, Communism has claimed more than 100 million lives. Today, it continues to enslave one-fifth of the world's people."
That may be true, but shouldn't the introductory sentence actually tell us something? Shouldn't it say who created the concepts of Communism? Shouldn't it at least mention Marx? --[[User:Goldstein|Goldstein]] 23:29, 1 September 2007 (EDT)