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:Thank you.  The information appears to be a factual straight forward description, at least in the first paragraph.  It all seems to be pertinent.  Even if it matches WP, I don't view it the same as copying large quantities.  I changed the second paragraph, where more individual style could be seen.  BTW, if you really find an article that's unsalvageable, don't hesitate to have it deleted.  The contest is to make CP better, so losing a couple of points to delete something that doesn't belong is no skin off my back. ;-) [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 14:24, 13 November 2007 (EST)

:Thank you.  The information appears to be a factual straight forward description, at least in the first paragraph.  It all seems to be pertinent.  Even if it matches WP, I don't view it the same as copying large quantities.  I changed the second paragraph, where more individual style could be seen.  BTW, if you really find an article that's unsalvageable, don't hesitate to have it deleted.  The contest is to make CP better, so losing a couple of points to delete something that doesn't belong is no skin off my back. ;-) [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 14:24, 13 November 2007 (EST)