I like your reference to Jesus, but please do not change entries from complete sentences to sentence fragments.
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John Newton (1725-1807), a former slave ship captain who converted to Christianity and then wrote the song "Amazing Grace" after Jesus changed his heart.
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John Newton (1725-1807) was a former slave ship captain who converted to Christianity and then wrote the song "Amazing Grace" after Jesus changed his heart.
"Amazing grace! How sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me! I
"Amazing grace! How sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me! I