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The casualty section only covers Coalition, Civilian and Insurgent deaths. Shouldn't the casualty estimate also include deaths of Iraqi Security Force members. They are fighting with the coalition and are an integral part of the exit strategy, so I think the heavy losses they've sustained deserve recognition. [[User:TruePatriot|TruePatriot]] 20:10, 10 August 2007 (EDT)
 
The casualty section only covers Coalition, Civilian and Insurgent deaths. Shouldn't the casualty estimate also include deaths of Iraqi Security Force members. They are fighting with the coalition and are an integral part of the exit strategy, so I think the heavy losses they've sustained deserve recognition. [[User:TruePatriot|TruePatriot]] 20:10, 10 August 2007 (EDT)
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I don't understand what this sentence is trying to convey as it is badly constructed: "In the post-9/11 analysis to determine discontent in the Islamic world that had produced a flurry of dedicated suicide jihadists, the twelve year old UN imposed sanctions imposed upon Iraq and the resultant humanitarian crisis was one such often cited reason" [[User:Conservative|Conservative]] 18:55, 20 November 2007 (EST)
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