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''As for the rest, the article is not easily understandable. Please try again.''
''As for the rest, the article is not easily understandable. Please try again.''
: I'd greatly appreciate some help in figuring out what is not understandable. I ran it by my girlfriend first, and she helped a lot, but I honestly can't see what's unclear in order to fix it ... [[User:Ungtss|Ungtss]] 12:03, 29 August 2007 (EDT)
: I'd greatly appreciate some help in figuring out what is not understandable. I ran it by my girlfriend first, and she helped a lot, but I honestly can't see what's unclear in order to fix it ... [[User:Ungtss|Ungtss]] 12:03, 29 August 2007 (EDT)
==Reword and Grammar==
I hope no one minds - but for consistency I've removed the french spacing in the article, and I've also reworded the intro a bit for accuracy based off a few links I got from dictionary.com--<small>[[User:Iduan|<span style="color: #FFCCCC; background: #660000">I]][[User_talk:Iduan|<span style="color:#CCCCFF; background:#000033">Duan]]</span></span></small> 17:39, 4 December 2007 (EST)