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, 20:40, December 11, 2007
This page is full of grammar errors and factual errors. An editor corrected them but was twice reverted. His corrections seemed good to me, not that I am an expert.
If the reverts were because of perceived vandalism or pushing of POV, I'd suggest to only revert the relevant points, but make good use of his grammar and factual corrections. [[User:Leopeo|Leopeo]] 15:40, 11 December 2007 (EST)