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I notice that you’ve been a primary editor of [[Joseph McCarthy]], so I thought I’d solicit your opinion and help on the portion of the page, pertaining to Ralph Flanders’s role in [[Joseph McCarthy#Condemnation and the Watkins Committee | Condemnation and the Watkins Committee]]. As I noted on the [[Talk:Joseph McCarthy#Flanders role in Senate censure]], there were some unreferenced passages of questionable provenance. I have since done some research and have provided some proposed text to substitute for the first two paragraphs of the section in question.
 
I notice that you’ve been a primary editor of [[Joseph McCarthy]], so I thought I’d solicit your opinion and help on the portion of the page, pertaining to Ralph Flanders’s role in [[Joseph McCarthy#Condemnation and the Watkins Committee | Condemnation and the Watkins Committee]]. As I noted on the [[Talk:Joseph McCarthy#Flanders role in Senate censure]], there were some unreferenced passages of questionable provenance. I have since done some research and have provided some proposed text to substitute for the first two paragraphs of the section in question.
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I invite you to review the proposed text at [[User talk:Norwich#Flanders role in Senate censure of Joseph McCarthy]] and leave feedback on what I’ve written before any substitute language is installed in that portion of the McCarthy article.
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I invite you to review the proposed text at [[User talk:Norwich#Flanders role in Senate censure of Joseph McCarthy]] and leave feedback on what I’ve proposed before any substitute language is installed in that portion of the McCarthy article.
    
Sincerely, [[User:Norwich|Norwich]] 16:07, 11 December 2007 (EST)
 
Sincerely, [[User:Norwich|Norwich]] 16:07, 11 December 2007 (EST)
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