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:Looking at it so far, I would say mention of his atheism should be made in the opening paragraph when describing him. If he was an author that just happened to be an atheist, then that's one thing. But he is writing for the viewpoint of atheism, so that is germane. I would also be careful that the response section is clear as to the general Christian viewpoint, which is not positive or neutral. Quote mining can always pull up some positive statement, but the general view is clear and that should be evident. The plot section will probably stay pretty much as is, after all, it's only plot. I'm not seeing an email address for you. Do you have one? It may be easier for me to email you directly. I find personal one on one conversation is often more productive than using talk pages. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 18:37, 5 December 2007 (EST)
:Looking at it so far, I would say mention of his atheism should be made in the opening paragraph when describing him. If he was an author that just happened to be an atheist, then that's one thing. But he is writing for the viewpoint of atheism, so that is germane. I would also be careful that the response section is clear as to the general Christian viewpoint, which is not positive or neutral. Quote mining can always pull up some positive statement, but the general view is clear and that should be evident. The plot section will probably stay pretty much as is, after all, it's only plot. I'm not seeing an email address for you. Do you have one? It may be easier for me to email you directly. I find personal one on one conversation is often more productive than using talk pages. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 18:37, 5 December 2007 (EST)
: Just thought I'd pop in and say thanks for the edit to the Balthamos/Baruch section. I maintain that homoerotic is probably a more accurate description of their relationship, since it's not explicitly sexual, but it's a fair call for the sake of convenience. Anyway, keep up the good work. [[User:Underscoreb|Underscoreb]] 19:05, 13 December 2007 (EST)