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Better now? [[User:Ga ohoyt|Ga ohoyt]] 20:49, 14 March 2008 (EDT)

Better now? [[User:Ga ohoyt|Ga ohoyt]] 20:49, 14 March 2008 (EDT)

: I'm not sure (but I don't think it's worse).  I don't think it's appropriate to have a question for a heading, and neither do I think it's appropriate for the heading to be part of the flow of the text, as is now the case, because the first sentence of the section doesn't make sense without the heading.  A heading should give an idea of what the section is about, not be part of the section, if you're following me.  Also, the claim is not (normally) explicitly made that the Bible defines pi, as indicated by the heading.  Rather, that claim is ''implicit'' in the ''explicit'' claim that the Bible has an incorrect value for pi.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 01:19, 15 March 2008 (EDT)

: I'm not sure (but I don't think it's worse).  I don't think it's appropriate to have a question for a heading, and neither do I think it's appropriate for the heading to be part of the flow of the text, as is now the case, because the first sentence of the section doesn't make sense without the heading.  A heading should give an idea of what the section is about, not be part of the section, if you're following me.  Also, the claim is not (normally) explicitly made that the Bible defines pi, as indicated by the heading.  Rather, that claim is ''implicit'' in the ''explicit'' claim that the Bible has an incorrect value for pi.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 01:19, 15 March 2008 (EDT)