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:: I don't know whether you think the recent edits solve the problem, but they don't.  The parts copied from other sources are still there and still not presented as quotes.  They need to be either removed, or presented as quotes, but the problem with the latter is that the recent changes still don't change the fact that the article comprises almost entirely quotes and would look silly as such.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 07:05, 8 April 2008 (EDT)

:: I don't know whether you think the recent edits solve the problem, but they don't.  The parts copied from other sources are still there and still not presented as quotes.  They need to be either removed, or presented as quotes, but the problem with the latter is that the recent changes still don't change the fact that the article comprises almost entirely quotes and would look silly as such.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 07:05, 8 April 2008 (EDT)

:: I am sure your English is much better than mine. Could you please say the same ideas with different words. That could solve your problem; am I right? According to copyright rules it is perfectly right to take small sentences giving a link to the source, as we have in the article. But It could be better with your precious help.  --[[User:Joaquín Martínez]], [[User talk:Joaquín Martínez|talk]] 10:21, 8 April 2008 (EDT)

:: I am sure your English is much better than mine. Could you please say the same ideas with different words? That could solve your problem; am I right? According to copyright rules it is perfectly right to take small sentences giving a link to the source, as we have in the article. But It could be better with your precious help.  --[[User:Joaquín Martínez]], [[User talk:Joaquín Martínez|talk]] 10:21, 8 April 2008 (EDT)