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This article is listed to be a [[Conservapedia:Featured articles|featured article]] (as from 10th April if the order is not changed). It's quite good, but could do, I believe with some pictures of notes and other musical notation to illustrate the description in the ''Rhythm'' section, and perhaps even the addition of a ''Musical notation'' section. [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 07:04, 25 March 2008 (EDT)
This article is listed to be a [[Conservapedia:Featured articles|featured article]] (as from 10th April if the order is not changed). It's quite good, but could do, I believe with some pictures of notes and other musical notation to illustrate the description in the ''Rhythm'' section, and perhaps even the addition of a ''Musical notation'' section. [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 07:04, 25 March 2008 (EDT)
== Rewrite ==
There are some weaknesses in this article, which I will attempt to improve. Statements to the effect that "music can be the most dangerous art form, when misused" are unverifiable and highly debatable. It comes across not unlike those old warnings that "negroid dance rhythms" would corrupt the nation's youth. Biblical references are fine, but in their own section and not the opening paragraph. I'll write more here when I'm done. [[User:Eoinc|Eoinc]] 11:03, 4 May 2008 (EDT)