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::For the time being please supply the edits that you feel would be helpful/improvements. Your previous edit was an improvement and I'm guessing other alterations you would wish to make will be as well. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 11:56, 8 May 2008 (EDT)
::For the time being please supply the edits that you feel would be helpful/improvements. Your previous edit was an improvement and I'm guessing other alterations you would wish to make will be as well. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 11:56, 8 May 2008 (EDT)
:::Well, for a start, why is the comment by Quinn Fox given star billing and not listed in an apropriate place alongside the other commentaries? It's surely better to describe the book/film before you start pulling it to pieces. I won't bother to list the numerous typos for you - you can find them yourself or unlock the article so that I can fix them for you. [[User:Humblpi|Humblpi]] 12:29, 8 May 2008 (EDT)