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:Thanks Philip.  I am prohibited from making any changes to anything that Mr. Schlafly has written because a certain administrator has forbidden me to do so and has threaten to block me if I ever do it again.  I only make additions or minor editing, not deletions; this is one of the reasons some of the articles I have edited look a bit bizarre. --[[User:Jimmy|Jimmy]] 23:38, 1 June 2008 (EDT)
 
:Thanks Philip.  I am prohibited from making any changes to anything that Mr. Schlafly has written because a certain administrator has forbidden me to do so and has threaten to block me if I ever do it again.  I only make additions or minor editing, not deletions; this is one of the reasons some of the articles I have edited look a bit bizarre. --[[User:Jimmy|Jimmy]] 23:38, 1 June 2008 (EDT)
 
:I'll help take up the flag on this one and make some of those changes.--[[user:TomMoore|<font color="#000066" >Tom Moore</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:TomMoore|fiat justitia ruat coelum]]</sup> 01:23, 2 June 2008 (EDT)
 
:I'll help take up the flag on this one and make some of those changes.--[[user:TomMoore|<font color="#000066" >Tom Moore</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:TomMoore|fiat justitia ruat coelum]]</sup> 01:23, 2 June 2008 (EDT)
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:: Folks, this is an encyclopedia.  That means the essential material goes first where the reader can understand it right away.  This is not a book, where story telling from beginning to end may be appreciated.
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:: This entry should explain to the reader up-front what this case was about, what drove it, and who won what.  It doesn't do that now and the list of plaintiffs who had no financial interest in the case obscures what really happened.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 08:16, 2 June 2008 (EDT)
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