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Your recent paper in PNAS, "Historical contingency and the evolution of a key
 
Your recent paper in PNAS, "Historical contingency and the evolution of a key
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innovation in an experimental population of Escherichia coli,"[http://myxo.css.msu.edu/lenski/pdf/2008,%20PNAS,%20Blount%20et%20al.pdf] has created interest in the media and among the public.  We note that the paper acknowledged taxpayer funding and that PNAS has a policy of making data available.
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innovation in an experimental population of Escherichia coli,"[http://myxo.css.msu.edu/lenski/pdf/2008,%20PNAS,%20Blount%20et%20al.pdf] has has interested us greatly.  Knowing PNAS policy of making data available, we were hoping you would accordingly oblige us with your recorded observations for a few key points.
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Given the significance of the claims, we respectfully request the public release of the data underlying the key claims in the paper for public scrutiny.  Like most papers, your paper itself does not disclose the data themselves, and three times your paper expressly states that referenced data are not shown.  Your website[https://myxo.css.msu.edu/ecoli/] already discloses some older data, and seems well-suited for public release of the data underlying your recent paper.
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We respectfully request the data relating to the period during which the bacterial colony developed cit+; while we see excerpts in the paper, we were hoping to examine them in context.  Your website[https://myxo.css.msu.edu/ecoli/] already discloses some older data, and seems well-suited for public release of the data underlying your recent paper.
    
Thank you in advance for your cooperation in this.
 
Thank you in advance for your cooperation in this.
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:: I think it's reasonably obvious what the key claims are in the paper, and what the key data are underlying those claims.  But, if you like, perhaps you can revise the above letter.  The paper itself is not long and feel free to cite to it, if you think that is necessary.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 21:10, 16 June 2008 (EDT)
 
:: I think it's reasonably obvious what the key claims are in the paper, and what the key data are underlying those claims.  But, if you like, perhaps you can revise the above letter.  The paper itself is not long and feel free to cite to it, if you think that is necessary.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 21:10, 16 June 2008 (EDT)
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:::I just think it helps to be as specific as possible.  But I have edited a bit with slightly more polite wording and more specificity.  I hope it is acceptable?--[[user:TomMoore|<font color="#000066" >Tom Moore</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:TomMoore|fiat justitia ruat coelum]]</sup> 21:16, 16 June 2008 (EDT)
    
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