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The list of breast cancers above will grow, but already it is plainly way above the expected occurrence of the disease.  For example, there are likely no more than 500 [[Hollywood]] performers under age 30 who would publicly disclose a condition of breast cancer{{fact}}, yet 3 developed breast cancer.  But The typical incidence of that disease is only 2 out of 5000.  The incidence in [[Hollywood]] appears to be more than 10 times that of the general population.  If the population from which the above sample is drawn is twice as high, the incidence in [[Hollywood]] would still be more than 5 times the rate in the general population.

The list of breast cancers above will grow, but already it is plainly way above the expected occurrence of the disease.  For example, there are likely no more than 500 [[Hollywood]] performers under age 30 who would publicly disclose a condition of breast cancer{{fact}}, yet 3 developed breast cancer.  But The typical incidence of that disease is only 2 out of 5000.  The incidence in [[Hollywood]] appears to be more than 10 times that of the general population.  If the population from which the above sample is drawn is twice as high, the incidence in [[Hollywood]] would still be more than 5 times the rate in the general population.

There is likely no more than 1000 in the population of [[Hollywood]] types under age 35 who would have publicly disclose breast cancer{fact}}.  The list above has 8 cases (and growing).  The expected rate is only 1.5 out of 1000 in that age group.

There is likely no more than 1000 in the population of [[Hollywood]] types under age 35 who would have publicly disclose breast cancer{{fact}}.  The list above has 8 cases (and growing).  The expected rate is only 1.5 out of 1000 in that age group.

(a start - improve)

(a start - improve)